Trailer Draft 2 with Voice Over

This is the second draft of my trailer where I have added a voice over on top of the music, however I do not like the way that it sounds so in my final trailer it shall not have the voice over. When making the voice over with Joseph who is the male voice in the clip we all watched the trailer and recorded it over when we thought how it should have gone if we were really sat in an interrogation room being interviewed for a murder.