Friday, 17 April 2015

New Voice Over

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing this letter because I don’t know how much longer I have left…

It was mine and Rose’s 1 year anniversary the other day and it’s got to the point where I think I am actually in love with her, I have been speaking to Rose about our future together and she brought up the subject of my…other self. It made me think about how we will get along in the long term if I’m not able to control my mental illness without medication.


Have you ever…wanted to change something that you couldn’t control? 

This will last around 30 seconds over the trailer. 

Changes to Narrative and Title

Due to recent feedback on our trailer and print products after much thought we have decided to change our narrative slightly, as most of our negative feedback was that the narrative was not clear, and with the narrative we have, we believe it is going to be too difficult to make clear. After talking together and discussing ways to improve our trailer we have decided to first of all change our name to 'Plan B' instead of 'Plan C' and therefore give our character two personalities instead of one so she has more of a split personality than MPD.


I have already decided this as our new logo and i believe this will be effective towards the narrative. We are not scrapping the trailer that we have currently but we are giving it a new beginning to ease the audience into our product and we are having a voice over on top which is going to be in the form of a diary entry explaining the narrative more clearly.